Title: A walk in the park
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Rating: G (but the small bonus is probably PG)
Prompt: no. 2. Cheeks all flushed by the cold
Summary: What the title says (note not snow cold but a more wet coastal climate kind of cold )
Bonus: graphic depiction of snogging


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Date: 2008-12-13 03:37 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-12-13 04:21 pm (UTC)The comic-strip is simply amazing. I love how it starts as innocent kiss and develops to a heated, passionate one. Very well done. And Remus' sideburns! Gah!
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Date: 2008-12-13 06:01 pm (UTC)AND OH. OH, MY. GRAPHIC SNOGGING. HELL TO THE YES. :D I can't stop staring at Remus's sideburns/jawline for some reason, and oh, the look on his face.... I love the way they're looking at each other in the first panel, and the way you can see them getting more and more carried away throughout the comic. There's something really sweet about that kiss, alongside the evident swoon-inducing hawtt. (And seriously, there is a lot of swoon-inducing hawtt going on right there.) I love it. :D
I'm so glad right now that it was you who claimed my prompt, because this is absolutely wonderful. Thank you so, so much! In case my inability to stop babbling about them didn't make it abundantly clear: I think both of these are amazing. :D
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Date: 2008-12-18 02:35 pm (UTC)Hee, I actually tried to go with for a posh Sirius.
And the graphic snogging, it always feels sort of pointless to draw it, because honestly mostly it's for "the swoon-inducing hawtt" , which is sort of cheap so I'm happy you see something else too, because I tried to cram it in there.
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Date: 2008-12-13 06:35 pm (UTC)I love the color in the first piece, and the comic brings on waves upon waves of "awwww!"
*claps and cheers*
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Date: 2008-12-13 09:20 pm (UTC)There is a sweet innocence about the first piece, and the second is not just a kiss... there is so much more there!
Love them both!
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Date: 2008-12-13 11:42 pm (UTC)And while I agree about how lovely and posh their clothes are, I'll admit it took me about ten minutes to look away from Sirius's eyes, and another ten from Remus's mouth. Holy Hannah, but you can draw.
The comic is like less like an extra Christmas present and more like an extra whole Christmas day. So sweet!
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Date: 2008-12-14 12:51 am (UTC)And what can I say about the bonus panels that hasn't been said! You've expressed it all, the tension, the the need and the love. Thank you so much!
Colleen
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Date: 2008-12-18 02:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-14 01:40 am (UTC)I'm sorry I can't leave a more coherent comment. <3
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Date: 2008-12-14 02:42 am (UTC)That is all :-)
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Date: 2008-12-14 03:28 am (UTC)The comic strip is wonderfully drawn and stop-effect style of a kiss in motion provokes me to want to write it.
You put so much thought into this and it wholly shows in your amazing result.
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Date: 2008-12-15 11:45 am (UTC)stalkcheck out your other art ;o)Oh, and second-to-last panel, where the kiss has just begun... nnggghh!!!
Here via remus_news, but I'm watching this comm also
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Date: 2008-12-15 07:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-15 07:55 pm (UTC)And I love how late '70's it really felt! Their hair and clothing were perfect!
Great use of color, too.
But, oh, what a wonderful kiss!! The way that Remus kisses back is just perfect! However, my favorite bit, was Remus' shy look down at his feet. Lovely!
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Date: 2009-01-01 11:24 pm (UTC)Really well done. ♥
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