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Title: Heart Cup
Author: Laura (solidbaby)
Written For: Kat (kittehkat)
Rating: G
Prompt: Hot chocolate
Summary: The hot chocolate is hot and Sirius likes it.
Notes: It's a bit strange, but hopefuly bearable. Thank you to my friend Helena for her beta job.

The steam from the hot chocolate rises in the air and shifts and twirls in a pretty pattern, highlighted by the fluorescent lights of the café. Sirius sips his, enjoying the slight burn on his tongue, and glares at the empty seat in front of him. The space where Remus should be, but isn’t.

He contemplates charming the steam into a shape while he waits for Remus. But he realises that the waitress who has been staring at him for the past twenty minutes will see. So he contains himself and is content for a while to watch the swirly patterns climbing to the ceiling.

Remus comes into the café, bringing with him the biting wind and excited chatters of shoppers from outside. He searches around, eyes moving swiftly over every nicotine stained wall, crumb-covered table and cold customers, before finally, finally seeing Sirius in the corner with his two hot chocolates.

Remus smiles warmly. He begins unwinding his scarf from around his neck and keeps pulling and pulling until eventually, Sirius can see the pale and lightly scarred neck. Remus walks his walk to the table and sits down wordlessly. Sirius wonders why he’s refused to say anything yet, but wallows in the gorgeous feeling of filled absence.

They sit, Sirius burning his tongue and Remus warming his hands on the radiator. They still don’t talk, although there’s too much to say. There always is too much to say between them.

Sirius places his ungloved hand on the table, showing off his prominent burn from a misguided attempt at baking. There are two curving lines over the jutting bone of his wrist. He’s not sure why he wants Remus to see it, but coughs slightly so that Remus’s attention is drawn to him and his hands on the table.

‘Oh Padfoot.’ Remus sounds weary, but amused. He must know that it isn’t serious, that it’s just a mark rather than a problem. Sirius would never show it if it meant something. It’s a game he plays for sympathy. Like the many games he plays with Remus.

Remus shifts in his chair, making sure that none of the builders or other patrons are looking. The waitress has stopped staring at Sirius now, and is chatting with a friend. They have their elbows on the counter by the till and seem to be talking about what to buy newly-acquired boyfriends for presents.

Apparently satisfied with their lack of attention, Remus looks Sirius in the eyes and puts his hands on the table too. The still-gloved hands slide towards Sirius’ hands, and he picks the wounded hand up and places it on top of his, palms touching. Never breaking eye contact, Remus lifts the hand to his mouth and kiss the round bone where the burn is. Then, he puts the hand down, picks up his hot chocolate and tastes to see if it is still hot.

It is.

Sirius stares as Remus makes a big fuss of his burnt and stinging tongue. He can’t kiss it better, so instead, he makes sure no-one is looking before charming the steam into a heart. Remus gives him a warm smile and Sirius thinks that it’s better than hot chocolate.

 

Date: 2007-12-14 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anothersaturday.livejournal.com
Oh, my god! This was so sweet! Your prose is just gorgeous, there's so much detail and just a sort of compelling-ness to it. (Compelling-ness is not actually a word, is it?) This just filled me with squee. :D

Date: 2007-12-14 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
Wonderful! So simple and quiet and sweet.

Date: 2007-12-14 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leafyaki.livejournal.com
So lovely! :D Sirius charming the steam into a heart shape for Remus, and trying to gain sympathy for his burnt hand and tongue... *Melts* So so sweet!

Date: 2007-12-14 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] withpins.livejournal.com
Aw, this was amazingly sweet. :-D I love the idea of Sirius playing for sympathy with Remus, and the detail of the cafe was beautiful. Awesome work!

Date: 2007-12-14 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spacefragments.livejournal.com
aaaah! i have a enormous hand-kink so i enjoyed this a lot. :D very lovely. i love how they communicate through their "games", without any words. i love the description of the cafe, i could picture it perfectly.
now i want a cup of hot chocolate...

Date: 2007-12-14 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xbittersweet89x.livejournal.com
Aw, that was so sweet. *melts*

Date: 2007-12-14 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carmine-ink.livejournal.com
I read this while drinking hot chocolate, and it was perfect ;D
Really though, you have a lovely, simplistic style and I particularly adored the little hand-kiss. So sweet. :)

Date: 2007-12-14 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quartetship.livejournal.com
This is lovely! I really like the whole "keeping things on the low" feel of it; it adds to the warmth. Well, that and the chocolate... *yummy*

Date: 2007-12-14 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittehkat.livejournal.com
Ehehehe! That was so sweet! I liked the bittersweet feel of it in the middle, especially. Also, the focus on Remus' scarred neck, mmm. Lovely job, thank you so much! :D

Date: 2007-12-15 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] learningtolove8.livejournal.com
That was so sweet! I want a Sirius now, who'll be sweet and adorable and charm the steam of my hot cocoa into heart shapes.

Date: 2007-12-15 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cindergal.livejournal.com
So sweet! I love how you can see how well they love and understand each other just through these little gestures.
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Date: 2007-12-15 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liseuse.livejournal.com
This is adorable and sweet. The idea of them communicating through games and things unsaid really makes them feel like a proper couple. All short words and raised eyebrows and no one ever really saying anything, Plus, the idea of Sirius charming a heart out of steam is dreadfully cute!

Date: 2007-12-17 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] starkdependant
Lovely, absolutely love. Your icon terrifies me though. :D

Date: 2007-12-17 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] llpotter.livejournal.com
Awwww, that was so sweet I actually said awwwwww out loud. The heart in the steam really just made my day. I think I'll go find some hot chocolate now... :)

Date: 2007-12-23 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lotrwariorgodss.livejournal.com
Very sweet - makes me want hot chocolate! And Sirius is adorable with his burn, only equaled by Remus's adorableness in kissing it better, lol.

Date: 2008-01-06 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marauder-s-mad.livejournal.com
So lovely and adorable ! I loved it !

Date: 2008-02-18 10:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stiss.livejournal.com
So I was going through my emails that I left unread to go back to and found the one with a link to this, so... sorry I'm like 2 or 3 months late, but that was very cute, well done. Lol how is your burn by the way? Anyway I'm gonna see you in about an hour, but just wanted to say I liked this!...




Even though J2 are a much better couple and they're REAL. Write SPN! But I did like this...

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