While I do love the boys in this and the Remus description is spot on, I'm also inclined to congratulate you on your Lily and Peter. Peter teasing Sirius is something that is rarely seen because of fanfic writers negativity towards him. This, though, is just great, capturing all of their reactions to something which is ridiculously annoying - my ex used to do it and, funnily enough, the only way I could stop him was by snogging him senseless too. Great story and wonderful characters!
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Date: 2009-12-29 08:17 pm (UTC)