Wonderful AU! Can we just keep this one? I think my favorite part is that you didn't make your story too easy. They were still at war, there was distrust to work through, Sirius had been in danger ..... The characterizations are so believable here, both suited to known canon but extrapolated to fit your circumstances too. And that's what I really want in a story, characters that live and breathe before me. &hearts
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Date: 2009-12-28 10:41 pm (UTC)I think my favorite part is that you didn't make your story too easy. They were still at war, there was distrust to work through, Sirius had been in danger .....
The characterizations are so believable here, both suited to known canon but extrapolated to fit your circumstances too. And that's what I really want in a story, characters that live and breathe before me. &hearts