OMG! This was... guh... just to beautiful for words. But, nevertheless, I shall try to express my feelings.
I kept reading line after line and wanting to quote it back to you, for it was all so indescribably lovely. Your writing is so evocative and poetic, the reader could just feel the love and beauty of the situation.
In addition to lovely, it was loving, and I adore you for the poignant beauty of your take on the situation. Of course Remus would neither know nor understand. Of course he would be horrified and confused. But I love the fact that Sirius still loved him - wanted to trust him - and was unwilling to leave him. In fact, that is very, very much how I imagine it. Yes, he eventually switched Secret Keepers, but, perhaps ONLY because he knew that, if anyone could break him, it would be Remus. Still, I cannot imagine too much distrust between the two because they knew each other so well and loved each other so much.
The photograph broke my heart. As did the entire piece. Even the sex had a poignant beauty in Remus' utter need to please and to love.
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Date: 2009-12-07 07:36 pm (UTC)I kept reading line after line and wanting to quote it back to you, for it was all so indescribably lovely. Your writing is so evocative and poetic, the reader could just feel the love and beauty of the situation.
In addition to lovely, it was loving, and I adore you for the poignant beauty of your take on the situation. Of course Remus would neither know nor understand. Of course he would be horrified and confused. But I love the fact that Sirius still loved him - wanted to trust him - and was unwilling to leave him. In fact, that is very, very much how I imagine it. Yes, he eventually switched Secret Keepers, but, perhaps ONLY because he knew that, if anyone could break him, it would be Remus. Still, I cannot imagine too much distrust between the two because they knew each other so well and loved each other so much.
The photograph broke my heart. As did the entire piece. Even the sex had a poignant beauty in Remus' utter need to please and to love.
Gorgeous!