Gah, that was great. I loved the mirror and Sirius sniffing him and Remus trying to play it cool. And then I loved Peter being so observant and normal, even if he did manage to slip in a bitter line or two. Thank you for not leaving him out or making him a stupid jerk! I loved that.
I also loved this: "Didn't you know? We married people want the whole world to be in love." She stood up on tiptoe to whisper in his ear. "It's like a conspiracy." LOL, so Lily.
The image of Sirius looking all disheveled and like a movie star was lovely. And then: "No, no, the other thing. The falling in love thing." "Did I actually say that part out loud?" "I'm afraid so."
And: "What are you doing?" "You're going to need that hand." "I...oh."
And the kiss was wonderful, with the second thoughts and the desperate sounds and the lapel grabbing. I really enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing it for me! :)
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Date: 2007-12-17 12:13 am (UTC)I also loved this: "Didn't you know? We married people want the whole world to be in love." She stood up on tiptoe to whisper in his ear. "It's like a conspiracy." LOL, so Lily.
The image of Sirius looking all disheveled and like a movie star was lovely. And then: "No, no, the other thing. The falling in love thing."
"Did I actually say that part out loud?"
"I'm afraid so."
And: "What are you doing?"
"You're going to need that hand."
"I...oh."
And the kiss was wonderful, with the second thoughts and the desperate sounds and the lapel grabbing. I really enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing it for me! :)