Date: 2007-12-16 11:11 pm (UTC)
I love your dialogue, seriously. I love it so much I want to MOLEST IT IN THE LOO. Very clever and snappy and charming and true to the characters.

The little glimpse of Peter's bitterness and left-out-ness was so well done, very subtle but you can sort of see where it's all heading.

And the last scene filled me with squee-ish-ness. SO, SO MUCH. :D
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