I was hoping it would come across like that-- like, the sections are sort of disconnected and could probably stand alone, but they're also connected in that they're all about how Remus and Sirius are graaaadually drawn together, sort of thing.
*gasp* You would've been happy without the detailed kissing? Heheh, you have a much less prurient mind than I, clearly! :D Oh, and I'm so glad you liked the dusk in that part, that was probably my favorite part to write, so I'm really pleased it went over well!
Anyway! Thank you so much for reading and for such a thoughtful and nice comment. :D
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Date: 2007-12-16 11:50 pm (UTC)I was hoping it would come across like that-- like, the sections are sort of disconnected and could probably stand alone, but they're also connected in that they're all about how Remus and Sirius are graaaadually drawn together, sort of thing.
*gasp* You would've been happy without the detailed kissing? Heheh, you have a much less prurient mind than I, clearly! :D Oh, and I'm so glad you liked the dusk in that part, that was probably my favorite part to write, so I'm really pleased it went over well!
Anyway! Thank you so much for reading and for such a thoughtful and nice comment. :D