Thank you for your lovely comment! I can’t help loving the word “achy” in it, too.
I’m also happy you found the closing line beautiful. The last paragraph just flowed like that, as a single sentence, and ishonn did not think it needed any improvements. I was a bit afraid the last couple of words would sound too melodramatic, so it’s reassuring to hear it all worked for you.
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Date: 2007-12-13 08:46 pm (UTC)I’m also happy you found the closing line beautiful. The last paragraph just flowed like that, as a single sentence, and