Oh, it definitely feels like we're sharing Remus's mind, particularly the way his thoughts dart about, touching but not quite elucidating (is that the right word?) what exactly has got him into such a state.
a meaningful part in the extensive story of my Remus’s life
I think I understand where you're coming from with this. Certainly, when I write gift fics, it's often a challenge to find a story that is meaningful to me and that fits the request. If it doesn't move me, then I feel I won't be able to do it justice.
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Date: 2007-12-17 02:13 am (UTC)a meaningful part in the extensive story of my Remus’s life
I think I understand where you're coming from with this. Certainly, when I write gift fics, it's often a challenge to find a story that is meaningful to me and that fits the request. If it doesn't move me, then I feel I won't be able to do it justice.