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Ohh gosh this was spectacularly written! I loved this idea of them eloping into the cold with only the comfort of one another but with these haunting elements that worked so well! you really nailed down the truth of what seemed to be cruelly possessing them both internally,that being possibly that they are both changed and they dont know what to do with that information. This i thought you were able to express so wonderfuly in those last couple of passages where they realize their changes but that they can relearn eachother with this time they made for one another ♡♡♡ you have such a wonderful way with emotions and atmosphere that makes your work always a pleasure to read! thank you for sharing this piece with us!❤