Whew! ***fans self*** that was hot as hell, but it was far more than that, too. I loved the tension and dialog at the beginning and how beautifully committed they are to one another. The passion! The emotion! The sex!
I also loved how your were able to capture their differences in so few words and sentences - and give us an outline of their imagined backstory as well. I felt right at home in their world and immediately understood where they were coming from. And that is not always easy in a piece this short.
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Date: 2017-12-11 07:40 pm (UTC)I also loved how your were able to capture their differences in so few words and sentences - and give us an outline of their imagined backstory as well. I felt right at home in their world and immediately understood where they were coming from. And that is not always easy in a piece this short.