Date: 2017-12-03 08:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] brighty18
Oh, that was super darling and funny, too. Great dialog, as well.

What a fun read! I especially liked this bit: "I need you, Moony," Sirius said, his hands gripping Remus's hips hard. Remus didn't mean to, but he shifted in Sirius's lap, wanting to feel the friction—Remus wanting more than he was willing to give. "This is the most real thing in my life and I…" So very sweet!

I also very much like the way you gave Sirius some very dog-like qualities without even mentioning the Animagus thing at all. He had that lovely canine way of being patient and expectant and pushing the envelope all at once.

Well done!

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