Oh, it’s wonderulf how you show Remus and Sirius in a relationship which is the most natural thing and in no need for explanations. Everything else as well looks completely real, and it’s interesting how you achieve this illusion of reality and make me share Remus’s experiences in an intense way, even though a lot is told in his dialogue or in his thoughts as something that has happened a bit earlier. Perhaps the key is the amount of vivid details. A lovely and excellent piece.
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Date: 2007-12-06 03:05 pm (UTC)