Oh, yeah, and clever and brilliant, too! OMG, the clouds! the clouds were so, freakning awesome. I love little magical touches like that in stories. Magic can be so fun!
I love the dialog and how you really gave it an "office romance" feel - despite the fact they lived together! And the description of Sirius' drawings were golden.
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Date: 2014-12-08 06:21 pm (UTC)Oh, yeah, and clever and brilliant, too! OMG, the clouds! the clouds were so, freakning awesome. I love little magical touches like that in stories. Magic can be so fun!
I love the dialog and how you really gave it an "office romance" feel - despite the fact they lived together! And the description of Sirius' drawings were golden.