I thought a lot about how to adjust the relationship between Sirius and Remus. In the original story, Sirius stands behind Remus and wraps his arms around Remus, touching his stomach. I purposely changed that (simultaneously thinking too hard about it and not enough) because it seemed like too much, and because I thought that women would have that conversation face-to-face. I don't know. A lot to think about, and I honestly don't think about it nearly as much when I'm writing femmeslash (rather than genderswap). I'd like to read some other writers' attempts, too.
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Date: 2014-01-05 05:36 am (UTC)I thought a lot about how to adjust the relationship between Sirius and Remus. In the original story, Sirius stands behind Remus and wraps his arms around Remus, touching his stomach. I purposely changed that (simultaneously thinking too hard about it and not enough) because it seemed like too much, and because I thought that women would have that conversation face-to-face. I don't know. A lot to think about, and I honestly don't think about it nearly as much when I'm writing femmeslash (rather than genderswap). I'd like to read some other writers' attempts, too.