Oh, my, this story is really a full-sensory experience. "Remus smells good, like Earl Grey tea and a hint of chocolate" and the scent of cumin the stew, and such great visuals like "the letter, still lying against the linoleum, slightly crumpled in one corner" and the twisted bedsheets. Wonderful.
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Date: 2011-12-08 04:43 am (UTC)