Excellent storytelling! I could really feel Remus' loneliness like a visceral ache. The other characters live too. Clueless but good hearted James, wise Lily and the tension between Sirius and Remus crackles. The banter is soooo good even as it emphasizes the pain of separation that's already there and foreshadows the enormous loss Remus will feel after October 31st.
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Date: 2010-12-13 02:36 am (UTC)I miss your santa hat this year.