Holding hands in the hoodie pocket is adorable, and I LOVE this bit:
“Sirius.” Remus says, trying for firm, but he catches a glimpse of the two of them in the mirror beside the door and his breath catches a bit in his throat. Sirius has his head resting on Remus’ shoulder, his arms around him in what looks like a gentle hug, and he’s looking at Remus... Merlin. The way his Dad looks at his Mum sometimes, the way Frank Longbottom looks at Alice - the way James looks at Lily.
I like the way you build up tension before they kiss - I actually held my breath! The whole fic is lovely. ♥
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“Sirius.” Remus says, trying for firm, but he catches a glimpse of the two of them in the mirror beside the door and his breath catches a bit in his throat. Sirius has his head resting on Remus’ shoulder, his arms around him in what looks like a gentle hug, and he’s looking at Remus... Merlin. The way his Dad looks at his Mum sometimes, the way Frank Longbottom looks at Alice - the way James looks at Lily.
I like the way you build up tension before they kiss - I actually held my breath! The whole fic is lovely. ♥