Haha. That description of the explosion, with Remus being deaf, really smacked of 'has this happened before?'. :D I can sympathise with Remus on that one. And Sirius going back for Christmas on the full moon! *snort* It's like we're doing legilimency or something.
because it's the little things that can make something more memorable. Exactly. I have this tendency to overdo dialogue (my cousin says I love my wit too much.) and I really envy people who can pick out what details to write in without the narrative getting cluttered and all.
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Date: 2010-01-02 03:15 am (UTC)because it's the little things that can make something more memorable. Exactly. I have this tendency to overdo dialogue (my cousin says I love my wit too much.) and I really envy people who can pick out what details to write in without the narrative getting cluttered and all.
And thanks! I hope you have a happy year, too. :D