Okay, everything brighty18 said? Ditto. :) Because I don't want to look like a complete lazy arse, I'll add this: This entire thing was brilliant. I love the awkwardness and the coming together (in more way than one! *waggles eyebrows*), and then the subsequent awkwardness when James and Peter returned... The hexes were great (antlers on James' bits--hilarious!) and the dialogue completely natural and fun. Loved the whole thing--it had a wonderful, smooth flow to it and it was just a great read. Thanks!
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Because I don't want to look like a complete lazy arse, I'll add this: This entire thing was brilliant. I love the awkwardness and the coming together (in more way than one! *waggles eyebrows*), and then the subsequent awkwardness when James and Peter returned... The hexes were great (antlers on James' bits--hilarious!) and the dialogue completely natural and fun. Loved the whole thing--it had a wonderful, smooth flow to it and it was just a great read. Thanks!