Bloody hell, that was funny! Not to mention hot and very, very sweet. Poor Remus! You crafted his confusion and anxiety well. I felt for him here, both before and after the first incident with Sirius. Friendships are horrifically complicated, are they not?
And, of course, your Remus would read sci-fi. You outed yourself as a astronomy-geek once (not that I’m not), and I love you for it. Okay, and your moon research kinda speaks for itself there, too! LOL. I love that you do that, though.
Sirius’ lyrics were hilarious, btw. And you are extraordinarily creative for thinking of them.
I loved this bit But not even mild annoyance could quell his erection. The combination of Sirius' voice and his bawdy lyrics about long, hard cocks and rutting had only made it worse.
And this: but he was too stunned to do more than make some bleating type of noise that sounded rather like a sickly goat.
And this: Not that his cock was huge in a grotesque sort of way or anything. It was just like the rest of him: long, skinny, slightly bent, and absolutely perfect. This may sound like a stupid compliment, but you describe cocks very well. You are a cock queen of sorts, I suppose. Even this: "You were right, Padfoot. We need more Billywigs," James said rather clinically, ignoring the fact that his cock was still sporting a rack of green antlers which continued to poke through the rent in his robes. LOL
I also have to say that I love your Marauders. They are so perfectly in character. ( Half the room was squawking, flashing, or otherwise misshapen in some way, and they still hadn't landed any significant hexes on each other. Still, they were both grinning madly, trading jaunty insults, and Remus really should have known better.) James, of course, is suitably hilarious, but your Peter is a real treat as well. He’s totally worthy of hanging out the coolest guys in school.
Most of all, as Remus pointed out, it was the incredible love between them all that makes this fic really shine. (Well, that and your writing.)
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And, of course, your Remus would read sci-fi. You outed yourself as a astronomy-geek once (not that I’m not), and I love you for it. Okay, and your moon research kinda speaks for itself there, too! LOL. I love that you do that, though.
Sirius’ lyrics were hilarious, btw. And you are extraordinarily creative for thinking of them.
I loved this bit But not even mild annoyance could quell his erection. The combination of Sirius' voice and his bawdy lyrics about long, hard cocks and rutting had only made it worse.
And this: but he was too stunned to do more than make some bleating type of noise that sounded rather like a sickly goat.
And this: Not that his cock was huge in a grotesque sort of way or anything. It was just like the rest of him: long, skinny, slightly bent, and absolutely perfect. This may sound like a stupid compliment, but you describe cocks very well. You are a cock queen of sorts, I suppose.
Even this: "You were right, Padfoot. We need more Billywigs," James said rather clinically, ignoring the fact that his cock was still sporting a rack of green antlers which continued to poke through the rent in his robes. LOL
I also have to say that I love your Marauders. They are so perfectly in character. (
Half the room was squawking, flashing, or otherwise misshapen in some way, and they still hadn't landed any significant hexes on each other. Still, they were both grinning madly, trading jaunty insults, and Remus really should have known better.) James, of course, is suitably hilarious, but your Peter is a real treat as well. He’s totally worthy of hanging out the coolest guys in school.
Most of all, as Remus pointed out, it was the incredible love between them all that makes this fic really shine. (Well, that and your writing.)
All I can say is: I loved it!