ext_289230 ([identity profile] deiareads.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2010-01-10 03:08 am (UTC)

Don't be shocked!! It's really me finally reviewing my gift.

I'm sorry I'm so ridiculously late. I didn't have time to sit down a write you proper comment until now. Holiday craziness unfortunately got in the way.

I'm so happy with your gift to me. I just read it again, so it'd be fresh in my mind, and I love it even more now.

The post-party/ pre-kiss scene was described beautifully. It was so intimate and comfortable. That was really what I wanted when I included 'late night talks' in the prompts. Thank you!!!

I adore the idea of Remus writing a list of reasons why he shouldn't be with Sirius. This is so him. :) I also loved the chess parallels in the end. How the board reflected what was happening with Remus. And Sirius is just lovely. Impulsive and lovely, just how I like him.

You did a lovely job with all the characters, even James who was only in the story for a few paragraphs was exactly how I imagine him.

Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story for me! And again I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you.

Have a wonderful new year!

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