ext_31687 ([identity profile] brighty18.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2009-12-10 06:25 pm (UTC)

That was beyond sweet and beyond lovely. And it totally made my day. You built up the tension so nicely, and their confusion was very, very sweet. Damn, James (who was very funny, btw.)

This bit just made me grin: Both of them knew the answer to those two syllables would either destroy their friendship, or signal the beginning of something scary and new. Sirius swallowed hard.

And the end? Perfect!

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