Oh, wow - this was lovely! That opening section was beautiful - the depth of Remus's emotion and overpowering love for Sirius is portrayed so well, so eloquently, that it only makes what follows more heart-wrenching. I love in the end to see them both fighting to hold on to what they have, instead one fighting like hell and the other hanging on for lack of a reason to let go; it makes my heart ache to see them both trying so hard to hold onto their love, knowing how it all turns out. *sniffle*
This is a fantastic gift - thank you so much, maraudersaffair!! <3