Okay, now for something more coherent. You did an amazing job of showing the dynamics of their relationship in just 1000 words. You get a sense that this is what it's like all the time -- touching and teasing and gentle nagging and not needing a real explanation for things that people on the outside would find truly bizarre, like the wand in the freezer and the one shoe. It's this kind of comfort and understanding that only really comes from being together for a long time and it's so perfect in this story...
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Oh, it's so domestic and squishy... And FRECKLES.
Okay, now for something more coherent. You did an amazing job of showing the dynamics of their relationship in just 1000 words. You get a sense that this is what it's like all the time -- touching and teasing and gentle nagging and not needing a real explanation for things that people on the outside would find truly bizarre, like the wand in the freezer and the one shoe. It's this kind of comfort and understanding that only really comes from being together for a long time and it's so perfect in this story...