http://sea-shtick.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sea-shtick.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2009-12-01 11:24 pm (UTC)

Gahh! So sweet, especially the end ("I'm satisfied with you.").

And I laughed out loud at this --

“That, my love, is surely the gayest Christmas tree in existence,” he’d proclaimed as he watched Sirius fussing with the brightly colored fairies.

Fairies on the tree! Love it. And then again at this --

...and Sirius - who’d been utilizing a surreptitious Concealment Charm to add an entire bottle of Firewhiskey to the eggnog...

I just love the bits of magic thrown into a story that is really more about human (well, you know) problems/relationships. And also that you used the prompts in the photograph, and then revisited them. Ok! I'm finished! Well done!

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