ext_37419 ([identity profile] oddsbobs.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2008-01-10 07:00 am (UTC)

I haven't responded to this yet? *is ashamed*

THANK YOU SO MUCH! This was perfect... I absolutely loved it. You did an excellent job portraying the tension and anger and fear of wartime. It made the little angst-demon in me squeal with delight.

The best part? Is that you not only talked about the power of words, you actually managed to convey it. After all of Remus's thoughts on the cruelty of words, the tone of the piece is very sad. But just the simple "I love you" completely changes it around. I feel the same hope that Remus does.

Ok so all that long rambling was basically just "I LOVE IT" and "THANK YOU!" all smushed up into incoherent squee-ing.


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