“You got it? Great! I told James to keep kicking me awake so I could finish it on the train. You know, we weren’t in the condition to Apparate, and then I walked…”

Haha, thought that was very funny. Nooo, he couldn't just ask to be shaken (or even pinched), he had to go for the kicking. It's struck me as a very "Sirius and James" thing to do.

Anyway, I always love how you can show such intimacy (like with the bath) while maintaining a low rating. And I'm not always fond of 1st-person POV, but you pulled it off fantastically.

I might go back and re-read it later, I liked this very much.