ext_358294 ([identity profile] verdigrisfille.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2008-05-02 01:35 am (UTC)

Oh wow - so beautifully written...

"But now the bliss of this warmth turns into a womb, and here his body needs mine. I’ll agree to still live, and as fully as possible."

Absolutely a perfect line, in every way possible. I love how you command the emotion between them. I rarely read first person, but this - this story was worth it in every possible way.

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