Ahhh oh my gosh I don't know where to begin! While reading through this i needed to pause and mentally note down the parts I loved best but everything was just so magnificently written and I abosutely loved the entirety of this story! i will say though some of the passages that really stuck out to me is that first motorbike scene where there is still all this unresolved tension between them, in which i thought their whole interaction in that paragraph was just written amazingly! And also those small moments like these "He was smiling kind of absently to himself the way he did when he forgot someone was watching. When he finished rolling Sirius summoned fire in his thoughts and lit it for him with magic, the flame burning pure blue at the center, struck and astonished as a run of silver ore." that always stick with me bc of how tender and sweet you compose each sentence ♡♡ and lastly of course the whole scene when they are finally about resolve all that sexual frustration between them was just really really great, their conversation leading up to their get together was honestly the best!!<333

also i just wanted to say your writings were one of the first I read when getting into r/s and you have left me eternally hooked on their reltionship( i don't think i could ever stop reading about these two loveable idiots--so thank you million times over for that❤❤❤and also that this fandom is so very very lucky to have you❤ thank you always for sharing your work!