The end just killed me. Why can't they have just a bit of kissing before seriousness intervenes? Probably because it wouldn't be such great written angst. Great use of flashbacks, they hurt in all the right ways. Great job.
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Date: 2014-12-30 01:18 am (UTC)The end just killed me. Why can't they have just a bit of kissing before seriousness intervenes? Probably because it wouldn't be such great written angst. Great use of flashbacks, they hurt in all the right ways. Great job.