http://bearshorty.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] bearshorty.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2014-12-25 06:09 pm (UTC)

Remus would make the best Christmas present! No wonder Sirius just wants to unwrap him. Great story. I like that they are older and already practically married. Now they just need to be kissing.


Great job in characterization of both of them: Remus who is hesitant both because he is unsure of Sirius' intention and also because he didn't allow himself to move beyond the fantasy and Sirius who is just ready to be brave at the slightest hint of possible success.


Loved also Sirius becoming Padfoot to enjoy the snow.


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