That was positively filthy and lovely. I will be back later with a real comment. But thank you!!!!
Back with a proper comment. Before I get into saying how much I enjoyed the hell out of this I want to say you never need to apologize to me for any "juvenile" joke. Juvenile humor is where I live and breath. I thought the title was brilliant.
Sorry if this is all over the place. I love top!Remus, and desperate Sirius. I love Remus being aggressive and fucking Sirius agains the door (OMG *bites fist* *dies*). I love the slow sex on the couch. I love the bedroom being completely the same. I love that Remus could read Sirius's reaction completely. The I love you parts got me. Which normally as a writer I shy away from those sort of declarations because they can easily be OTT so I commend you for 1) having in the fic and 2) doing it to perfection. It read so well and perfect and I loved it so much.
My favorite part out of all of it was this: “Well, well,” he said, when he had kissed up to Sirius’s temple. “Look at this.” He ran his fingers through the few strands of gray hair that were growing there. There is so much about Sirius having grey hair that I love that you won me over with this. It is so brilliant and perfect.
The sex...unf. All of it. I loved how you were able to to wrap so many different sex scenes and different moods into one fic. That was fantastic.
I loved this and enjoyed this so much. THANK YOU!!!
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Back with a proper comment. Before I get into saying how much I enjoyed the hell out of this I want to say you never need to apologize to me for any "juvenile" joke. Juvenile humor is where I live and breath. I thought the title was brilliant.
Sorry if this is all over the place. I love top!Remus, and desperate Sirius. I love Remus being aggressive and fucking Sirius agains the door (OMG *bites fist* *dies*). I love the slow sex on the couch. I love the bedroom being completely the same. I love that Remus could read Sirius's reaction completely. The I love you parts got me. Which normally as a writer I shy away from those sort of declarations because they can easily be OTT so I commend you for 1) having in the fic and 2) doing it to perfection. It read so well and perfect and I loved it so much.
My favorite part out of all of it was this: “Well, well,” he said, when he had kissed up to Sirius’s temple. “Look at this.” He ran his fingers through the few strands of gray hair that were growing there.
There is so much about Sirius having grey hair that I love that you won me over with this. It is so brilliant and perfect.
The sex...unf. All of it. I loved how you were able to to wrap so many different sex scenes and different moods into one fic. That was fantastic.
I loved this and enjoyed this so much. THANK YOU!!!