ext_242389 ([identity profile] smallgiftsmods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts2014-11-28 08:00 am
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Anyone up for an end-of-the-week challenge? Can you tell a Remus/Sirius story in only three sentences?

Prompts: secret smile; siblings; Lily Evans; splinched; homesick; second kiss; cauldrons explode (unprompted three-sentence stories welcome as well)

[identity profile] museinabsentia.livejournal.com 2014-11-28 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
The veil yawned open behind Sirius just as Remus' palm connected with his, pausing his tumble into oblivion. Over Sirius' shoulder he could see James and Lily and he very nearly let Sirius go to a place where he could be happy, but Lily smiled as she and James came up behind Sirius and pushed. As his lover fell safely into his arms Remus smiled back because they were all in agreement - it wasn't time yet.

[identity profile] magnetic-pole.livejournal.com 2014-11-28 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
*shivers* I love the idea of looking past that boundary between our world and the afterlife. Lovely! M.

[identity profile] museinabsentia.livejournal.com 2014-12-01 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, shivers. That's a good reaction. Thank you!

[identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com 2014-11-28 08:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my.
Very descriptive, and lovely foreshadowing of what ultimately happens.
Well done!

[identity profile] museinabsentia.livejournal.com 2014-12-01 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] mindabbles.livejournal.com 2014-11-29 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is amazing. Such a cool idea--and I very much approve of you taking this opportunity to save Sirius!!!

[identity profile] museinabsentia.livejournal.com 2014-12-01 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I will take any and all opportunities to save Sirius. They deserve their happy ending. And thank you. It was a fun challenge.