http://dustmouth.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dustmouth.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2014-05-06 02:13 am (UTC)

A steampunk AU is a wonderful, wonderful thing when it is written well, and you wrangled this one SO brilliantly. I wasn't sure how you'd manage it at first, what with the magic, but you did it so perfectly! I loved James and Peter and their clockwork chocolate frogs battling it out, and I loved the setting of the Hogwarts Express. Just reading the routine in such a different way was just the coolest thing.

And your moments between Sirius and Remus were just the most beautiful thing. I loved how delicate it all was, both of them just edging towards each other. There is such a wonderful feeling of familiarity and fondness between them all, and that is my favourite thing. I love how warm and close they can all be, and you just mastered that so wonderfully. Ah this was the sweetest, most charming story. I am so glad that I came back to catch up on all the fics I missed! <3

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