http://pavlablack.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] pavlablack.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] small_gifts 2012-12-11 03:12 am (UTC)

I can't imagine how much time and work went into this. I really felt as if I was reading or watching a Shakespearean play (which reminded me how rusty I am, but what better way to bring me back than a Remus/Sirius story?). I especially enjoyed the first scene, with Sirius brooding about his family and Remus trying to bring him out of his foul mood, and the brilliant sexual puns of the second and third scenes. And I especially loved this line from Remus in the last scene: “Or, rather, I believe another gospel now." Swoonworthy. I also really enjoyed how you handled certain canon details, such as Sirius's family and his death (or at least the death of his character in the next play). Amazing work—the bard would be proud! (Oh, and the drawing is wonderful too!)

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